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WANG CHUN Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Grammar and semantics

Hello,
Can you give a hand with three sentences, please.
If you find something wrong in grammar and semantics, help me check them.
Thank you for your help.



Advantages of live performances should take priority

Compared with a live concert, audience cannot communicate and interact with performers in front of television.

Spectators hope that they can watch a fluent game, helping them to integrate with it
  

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