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Alc24 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Grammar and punctuation need help
hello
i was just reading an article on drug abuse and i came across this sentence can someone correct it for me
1 If you snort it you don't have to take as much as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do
or would you say
1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do
and if someone could also correct the following it be great and tell me about the punctuation and grammar
1 I don't remember what i last wrote was/what it was i last wrote
2 When there is a mosquito in the room make sure not to expose any bare skin so as not to allow it to bite you/don't leave any body part visible for it to bite
3 For most of the time/for the majority of the time, he was coope up in his room
4 He won't make it for the birth of his child/make it in time for the birth of his child
5 The bed sheet wasn't laid out properly, so we turned it rightside up so as to be able to cover our feet with it
6 His acting isn't so good as to be able to pull of a role the likes of this one
thank you
al
i was just reading an article on drug abuse and i came across this sentence can someone correct it for me
1 If you snort it you don't have to take as much as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do
or would you say
1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do
and if someone could also correct the following it be great and tell me about the punctuation and grammar
1 I don't remember what i last wrote was/what it was i last wrote
2 When there is a mosquito in the room make sure not to expose any bare skin so as not to allow it to bite you/don't leave any body part visible for it to bite
3 For most of the time/for the majority of the time, he was coope up in his room
4 He won't make it for the birth of his child/make it in time for the birth of his child
5 The bed sheet wasn't laid out properly, so we turned it rightside up so as to be able to cover our feet with it
6 His acting isn't so good as to be able to pull of a role the likes of this one
thank you
al
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We would like you to try first, and we will correct your efforts.
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1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do OK
and if someone could also correct the following it be great and tell me about the punctuation and grammar
1 I don't remember what i last wrote was/what it was i last wrote I don't remember what i last wrote/I don't remember what it w
and if someone could also correct the following it be great and tell me about the punctuation and grammar
1 I don't remember what i last wrote was/what it was i last wrote I don't remember what i last wrote/I don't remember what it w
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1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do OK-- Not OK: there is a capitalization problem, two punctuation problems, a comparative adjective problem, and a confused word choice.
1 I don't remember what it was i last wrote I don't remember what i last wrote/I don't remember what it was
1 I don't remember what it was i last wrote I don't remember what i last wrote/I don't remember what it was
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1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do OK-- Not OK: there is a capitalization problem, two punctuation problems, a comparative adjective problem, and a confused word choice. COULD YOU HELP ME FIX THIS SENTENCE PLEASE
2 When there is a mosquito in the room, make sure not to expose any bar
2 When there is a mosquito in the room, make sure not to expose any bar
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1 You don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it, and the effects are a lot stronger and last longer when you do.
2 One seems about as good as the other.
3 One seems about as good as the other.
6 OK
2 One seems about as good as the other.
3 One seems about as good as the other.
6 OK
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