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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Grammar and Punctuation

Can someone please correct my grammar and punctuation in this short paragraph? I would greatly appreciate it. Thank you!

The Spartan Death Race has been called a lot of things; punishing, grueling, a test of torture. In the end it is none of these things. It's a test of self will; digging into the recesses of your soul to find the true you..It's a LIFE RACE.
  

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The Spartan Death Race has been called a lot of things: punishing, grueling, a test of torture etc. In the end, it is none of these things. It's a LIFE RACE.

  • The Spartan Death Race has been called a lot of things: punishing, grueling, a test of torture etc.
  • In the end, it is none of these things.
  • It's a LIFE RACE.
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The Spartan Death Race has been called a lot of things: punishing, grueling, a test of torture etc. In the end, it is none of these things. It's a test of self will; digging into the recesses of your soul to find the true you..It's a LIFE RACE.
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The Spartan Death Race has been called a lot of things; punishing, grueling, and a test of torture. In the end, it is none of these things. It's a test of self will, digging into the recesses of your soul to find the true you..;
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The Spartan Death Race has been called a lot of things: punishing, grueling, a torture test. In the end, it is none of these things. It is a test of self-will, a trek into the recesses of your soul to find the true you. It is a life race.
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enoonThe Spartan Death Race has been called a lot of things: punishing, grueling, a torture test. In the end, it is none of these things. It is a test of self-will, a trek into the recesses of your soul to find the true you. It is a life race.
You didn't use and in front of a torture.., was it intentional? If so, what differe

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