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Rishonly Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
GRAMMAR & PUNCTUATION CHECK
Hello Teachers,
Would you please check the grammar and punctuation mistakes in the following paras?
Human Resource Management Audit is a process to evaluate whether the HR functions are aligned with business strategy or vision of a company and to suggest the improvements in HRM practices. If I were to conduct a full audit on HR functions, I would focus on following perspectives.
(1) Analyze voluntary employee turnover, absenteeism, and overtime, so that unnecessary costs involved in hiring and training of new employees can be avoided.
(2) Identify the skill levels of employees in order to make sure right people are doing the right jobs. In addition, identify the inefficiencies in performing jobs relative to HR standards and norms.
(3) Analyze the performance evaluation methods and criteria used by the company. If performance evaluation criteria are too rigid, the employee morale will be low, and, on the other hand, if the evaluation criteria are too easy to meet, the company might end up losing money.
Would you please check the grammar and punctuation mistakes in the following paras?
Human Resource Management Audit is a process to evaluate whether the HR functions are aligned with business strategy or vision of a company and to suggest the improvements in HRM practices. If I were to conduct a full audit on HR functions, I would focus on following perspectives.
(1) Analyze voluntary employee turnover, absenteeism, and overtime, so that unnecessary costs involved in hiring and training of new employees can be avoided.
(2) Identify the skill levels of employees in order to make sure right people are doing the right jobs. In addition, identify the inefficiencies in performing jobs relative to HR standards and norms.
(3) Analyze the performance evaluation methods and criteria used by the company. If performance evaluation criteria are too rigid, the employee morale will be low, and, on the other hand, if the evaluation criteria are too easy to meet, the company might end up losing money.
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Hi, Human Resource Management Audit is a process to evaluate the alignment of HR functions with the business strategy and vision of a company, and to suggest improvements in HRM practices. If I were to conduct a full audit on HR functions, I would focus on the following perspectives. (1) Analysis of voluntary employee turnover, absenteeism and overtime, so that unnecessary costs involved in hiring and training of new employees can be avoided.
- Hi, Human Resource Management Audit is a process to evaluate the alignment of HR functions with the business strategy and vision of a company, and to suggest improvements in HRM practices.
- If I were to conduct a full audit on HR functions, I would focus on the following perspectives.
- (1) Analysis of voluntary employee turnover, absenteeism and overtime, so that unnecessary costs involved in hiring and training of new employees can be avoided.
- (2) Identification of the skill levels of employees in order to ensure the right people are doing the right jobs.
- In addition, identification of any inefficiencies in job performance jobs relative to HR standards and norms.
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Hi,
Human Resource Management Audit is a process to evaluate the alignment of HR functions with the business strategy and vision of a company, and to suggest improvements in HRM practices. If I were to conduct a full audit on HR functions, I would focus on the following perspectives.
(1) Analysis of voluntary employee turnove
Human Resource Management Audit is a process to evaluate the alignment of HR functions with the business strategy and vision of a company, and to suggest improvements in HRM practices. If I were to conduct a full audit on HR functions, I would focus on the following perspectives.
(1) Analysis of voluntary employee turnove
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Thanks a lot, Clive. Would you please explain the reason for coverting the beginning verb words in to nouns?
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Hi,
I would focus on following perspectives.
(1) Analyze voluntary employee turnover, absenteeism, . . .
Would you please explain the reason for coverting the beginning verb words in to nouns?
It's because the noun 'perspective' is better followed by a noun or a nou
I would focus on following perspectives.
(1) Analyze voluntary employee turnover, absenteeism, . . .
Would you please explain the reason for coverting the beginning verb words in to nouns?
It's because the noun 'perspective' is better followed by a noun or a nou
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Be sure to focus on the areas with the highest risks, Rishonly. :-)
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in the movie Christy falls in love twice ,at first he fell in love with the woman who was helping him he was very disappointed finding out she was engaged and about to get married in six months later on in the movie he fell in love with a woman name Mary and got married with her in the 1970;s
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Hi,
It's too hard to read. You need to revise all this by starting each sentence with a capital letter and ending it with a period.
Please do that, and repost it, and we will then be able to offer you more comments. OK?
Best wishes, Clive
It's too hard to read. You need to revise all this by starting each sentence with a capital letter and ending it with a period.
Please do that, and repost it, and we will then be able to offer you more comments. OK?
Best wishes, Clive
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