Grammar? Again ^^

Question

1. The way she approached problems by her different perspectives that impressed me a lot.

2. I was impressed by her different perspectives when it comes to approaching problems

Are both sentences grammatical? And which one sounds more natural? Thank you!

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

nhung 3121. The way she approached problems by her different perspectives that impressed me a lot.

The first sentence is not grammatical.

If we remove the relative clause modifying "way," we get this sentence. Oops, it is a noun phrase, not a sentence.

The way that impressed me a lot.

The relative clause is not natural English. Here is a fix.

she approached solving problems by considering them from different perspectives

nhung 3122. I was impressed by her different perspectives when it came to approaching problems

That is neither grammatical nor natural. The tenses are not in agreement, and the collocations are strange.

I was impressed by the way she solved problems by analyzing them from a variety of perspectives.

Teechr · Answer

nhung 312 ~~The way she approached~~ Her unique approach to solving problems ~~by her different perspectives that~~ impressed me a lot.

Try that.

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