I have questions.
Due to technological innovations, music can now be experienced by more people, for more of the time than ever before. Mass availability has given individuals unheard-of control over their own sound-environment. However, it has also confronted them with the simultaneous availability of countless genres of music, in which they have to orient themselves. People start filtering out and organizing their digital libraries like they used to do with their physical music collections.
In the above passage, I have several questions.
Instead of 'in which'/themselves/filtering out and organizing/like, I wonder if where/them/to filter out and to organize/as are grammatically correct.
I can't wait to get answers. Thank you!
Juniper Kim 1354 countless genres of music in which they have to orient themselves to navigate . People are start ing filtering out and organizing to filter and organize their digital libraries like as they used to do with their physical music collections. For your comparison I've rewritten it as shown above.
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