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Alex722 Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Grammar

Hello. Could you please check whether the sentence below is grammatically correct?

In consequence, this situation hampers their effectiveness, keep them away from important projects and work of which they could significantly contribute to as well as benefit from.


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It seems you have lost control of the sentence. You'd better break it into more clauses/sentences. I'd put it as: In consequence, this situation hampers their effectiveness.

  • It seems you have lost control of the sentence.
  • You'd better break it into more clauses/sentences.
  • I'd put it as: In consequence, this situation hampers their effectiveness.
  • It also keeps them away from contributing to important and profitable projects.
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It seems you have lost control of the sentence. You'd better break it into more clauses/sentences.

I'd put it as:

In consequence, this situation hampers their effectiveness. It also keeps them away from contributing to important and profitable projects.

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Alex722In consequence

That is not a natural expression.

In light of the current situation, they are not as effective as they could be. They are working on trivial matters instead of more important projects.

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