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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Grammar

Fathers are not usually ready to make anything their children want because they want to think first if it's right or good to do what their children want or not.


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I would simplify this a little. You are putting in unneeded phrases: Fathers are not usually ready to make anything their children want because they want to decide think first if it's right or good [ pick a single term, not both ] to do what their children want or not .

  • I would simplify this a little.
  • You are putting in unneeded phrases: Fathers are not usually ready to make anything their children want because they want to decide think first if it's right or good [ pick a single term, not both ] to do what their children want or not .
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I would simplify this a little. You are putting in unneeded phrases:

Fathers are not usually ready to make anything their children want because they want to decide think first if it's right or good [pick a single term, not both] to do what their children want or not.

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