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Liton Das Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Grammar

It's my opinion about a guy, please review whether it's grammatically correct or not.

Though he is a nice a guy just because he got cheated so he cheated me and then again he contacted me and promised me he will give my money back


Now it's a real incident that happened with me, when a other guy asked me about him this is what I had told him.

Please review the post thanks a lot.

  

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Liton Das Though he is a nice a guy just because he got cheated so he cheated me and then again he contacted me and promised me he will give my money back Now it's a real incident that happened with me, when a other guy asked me about him this is what I had told him. You need more punctuation again.

  • Liton Das Though he is a nice a guy just because he got cheated so he cheated me and then again he contacted me and promised me he will give my money back Now it's a real incident that happened with me, when a other guy asked me about him this is what I had told him.
  • You need more punctuation again.
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Liton DasThough he is a nice a guy just because he got cheated so he cheated me and then again he contacted me and promised me he will give my money back Now it's a real incident that happened with me, when a other guy asked me about him this is what I had told him.

You need more punctuation again.

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You need to think in logical units. A logical unit of thought becomes a main clause or a sentence.
Sentences require punctuation to separate them from other sentences. You have many logical units jumbled together without punctuation. The sequence of events has some holes. That makes it incoherent. I have underlined the units of logic.

Though he is a nice

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