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Asta Maria Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Grammar
Is this paragraph grammatically correct, especially the second line?
As Alex and Sammy enter their senior years at Blue Mountain State, they get a contract saying that the goat house is being taken away. In order to save it, Alex goes to Blue Mountain State football star, Thad, asking for help. Thad will only help him if Alex makes the biggest and baddest party ever at the Goat House which is called Thadland. Thad gives Alex $50 million dollars to start making the party and Alex makes the best party ever.
As Alex and Sammy enter their senior years at Blue Mountain State, they get a contract saying that the goat house is being taken away. In order to save it, Alex goes to Blue Mountain State football star, Thad, asking for help. Thad will only help him if Alex makes the biggest and baddest party ever at the Goat House which is called Thadland. Thad gives Alex $50 million dollars to start making the party and Alex makes the best party ever.
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The only mistake I notice is "make a party", and it occurs several times. In English we throw a party, or organize a party, or have a party, but we don't make a party. I would use those three verbs in that order in your text, though other phrasings are also possible.
- The only mistake I notice is "make a party", and it occurs several times.
- In English we throw a party, or organize a party, or have a party, but we don't make a party.
- I would use those three verbs in that order in your text, though other phrasings are also possible.
- Thad will only help him if Alex throws the biggest and baddest party ever at the Goat House which is called Thadland.
- Thad gives Alex $50 million dollars to start organizing the party and Alex has the best party ever.
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The only mistake I notice is "make a party", and it occurs several times. In English we throw a party, or organize a party, or have a party, but we don't make a party.
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I would use those three verbs in that order in your text, though other phrasings are also possible.
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Thad will only help him if Alex
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I would use those three verbs in that order in your text, though other phrasings are also possible.
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Thad will only help him if Alex
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CalifJimAsta MariaThat's make sense. That makes sense.Arww..:-( I'm sorry.
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