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Vsuresh Posted 10 years ago
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Today’s younger generation is learning about the world around them at an incredible pace. Thanks to astounding advancements in the field of science and technology, today’s children are sensing “Information downpour.”
The biggest advantage of this situation, children very conveniently and comfortably learn about many things about nature and society. Just as a coin has two sides, this situation also calls for us to be careful about how we verify and assimilate the information before we add it to our knowledge bank.
While we are proud of achievements of inventions and innovations in almost every field, there is serious concern as to what is happening to our attitude towards the values of honesty, respect, love, compassion and tolerance that have hitherto bound the world community notwithstanding many conflicts at different times of history.
The onus of helping our children inculcate these values that further the cause of humanity is with every one of us. In the process of the children inculcating these values, parents play a decisive role in their children internalizing the pristine beliefs and attitude that form the essence of their culture and tradition.
Please point out the grammatical mistakes in this message.
Today’s younger generation is learning about the world around them at an incredible pace. Thanks to astounding advancements in the field of science and technology, today’s children are sensing “Information downpour.”
The biggest advantage of this situation, children very conveniently and comfortably learn about many things about nature and society. Just as a coin has two sides, this situation also calls for us to be careful about how we verify and assimilate the information before we add it to our knowledge bank.
While we are proud of achievements of inventions and innovations in almost every field, there is serious concern as to what is happening to our attitude towards the values of honesty, respect, love, compassion and tolerance that have hitherto bound the world community notwithstanding many conflicts at different times of history.
The onus of helping our children inculcate these values that further the cause of humanity is with every one of us. In the process of the children inculcating these values, parents play a decisive role in their children internalizing the pristine beliefs and attitude that form the essence of their culture and tradition.
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vsureshPlease point out the grammatical mistakes in this message.
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