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Vsuresh Posted 10 years ago
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My wife underwent Embryo Transfer treatment for pregnancy. This was the third time she had undergone this treatment as both of the earlier attempts were not successful. The doctors who administered this treatment on her have advised her to strictly avoid climbing stairs.
Please point out the mistakes in this piece:
My wife underwent Embryo Transfer treatment for pregnancy. This was the third time she had undergone this treatment as both of the earlier attempts were not successful. The doctors who administered this treatment on her have advised her to strictly avoid climbing stairs.
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My wife had her third embryo-transfer procedure; the first two attempts were unsuccessful. She has been advised by her doctor to strictly avoid climbing stairs.
- My wife had her third embryo-transfer procedure; the first two attempts were unsuccessful.
- She has been advised by her doctor to strictly avoid climbing stairs.
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My wife had her third embryo-transfer procedure; the first two attempts were unsuccessful. She has been advised by her doctor to strictly avoid climbing stairs.
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You're welcome, vsuresh, and I wish that couple a successful outcome with the fertility treatment; fingers crossed! 
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teechrYou're welcome, vsuresh, and I wish that couple a successful outcome with the fertility treatment; fingers crossed!Thank you very much teechr. It is very kind and thoughtful of you.
I will definitely mention this when I discuss the letter with them.
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