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Communication between MTL32_2020 Server and PLI in Android Tab Client.
Observation:
Kept 60 Hrs. Running.
Both the Side Communication is Active and Confirmed By
In Client Side continuous Pressure,Temparature,Oil Level Read outs Updating.
In Server Side Cont. Pump On/Off Command executing(and also observed Control bits w.r.t On/Hi Bits in controller).
is it Correct my Sentence?
Observation:
Kept 60 Hrs. Running.
Both the Side Communication is Active and Confirmed By
In Client Side continuous Pressure,Temparature,Oil Level Read outs Updating.
In Server Side Cont. Pump On/Off Command executing(and also observed Control bits w.r.t On/Hi Bits in controller).
is it Correct my Sentence?
Top answer
No. It's not a sentence. Instead, it seems to be several rough notes written in point form.
- No.
- It's not a sentence.
- Instead, it seems to be several rough notes written in point form.
- These points have no meaning for me, but may have meaning for the person you are writing them for.
- You need to start each point on a new line.
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No.
It's not a sentence. Instead, it seems to be several rough notes written in point form. These points have no meaning for me, but may have meaning for the person you are writing them for.
You need to start each point on a new line.
You have used too many capitals.You should only use a capital for the start of a point, or for a proper name.
Clive
It's not a sentence. Instead, it seems to be several rough notes written in point form. These points have no meaning for me, but may have meaning for the person you are writing them for.
You need to start each point on a new line.
You have used too many capitals.You should only use a capital for the start of a point, or for a proper name.
Clive
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