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Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
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Hi
Please point out the errors in this paragraph.

Some reality shows on the TV are designed to solely make money in the guise of providing opportunities to the skilled lot among the common masses. Such shows exploit the talented people to achieve their end by making them perform dance or stunts or other acts which are not in agreement with the culture of this land but are bound to win large audience comprising mainly of today's generation who are getting negatively influenced by growing violence and obscenity in films and print media.
  

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vsuresh Some reality shows on the TV Some reality shows on TV vsuresh are designed to solely make money in the guise of providing opportunities to the skilled lot among the common masses . are designed to solely make money in the guise of providing opportunities to the skilled among common people.

  • vsuresh Some reality shows on the TV Some reality shows on TV vsuresh are designed to solely make money in the guise of providing opportunities to the skilled lot among the common masses .
  • are designed to solely make money in the guise of providing opportunities to the skilled among common people.
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vsureshSome reality shows on the TV
Some reality shows on TV
vsureshare designed to solely make money in the guise of providing opportunities to the skilled lot among the common masses.
are designed to solely make money in the guise of providing
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vsureshwho are getting negatively influenced by growing violence and obscenity in films and print media.
What's this bit got to do with the start of the text?
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teechrWhat's this bit got to do with the start of the text?
It is the reason why they should watch something which is against the culture of the land.
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vsureshIt is the reason why they should watch something which is against the culture of the land.
but how is that related to reality shows on TV?
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Hi teechr

Thank you for help.

Let me put it this way.

I say some reality shows exploit the talented lot from common people to form dance, stunts and other acts that are against the culture of the land. They know that the younger generation are influenced by obscenity in films and print media would watch such programmes in large number and increase the TRP and thus make t
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exploit the talented lot from common people (contestants?)

Exploit - The producers promise a lot of money to talented people, but after they do their acts of dancing and singing, they do not pay them what was promised.

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