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Keith Baltazar 6661 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Grammar
Which sentence is correct? or both re grammatically incorrect? Please help.
1). Determination IS the key why I MANAGED to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa respectively.
2). Determination WAS the key why I MANAGED to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa respectively.
Thanks
1). Determination IS the key why I MANAGED to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa respectively.
2). Determination WAS the key why I MANAGED to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa respectively.
Thanks
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You need to rephrase this. Here's something close to what you have: It was through determination that I managed to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa. I would rephrase it even more: Determination was the key to my success as a nurse in Australia and Africa.
- You need to rephrase this.
- Here's something close to what you have: It was through determination that I managed to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa.
- I would rephrase it even more: Determination was the key to my success as a nurse in Australia and Africa.
- CJ
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You need to rephrase this.
Here's something close to what you have:
It was through determination that I managed to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa.
I would rephrase it even more:
Determination was the key to my success as a nurse in Australia and Africa.
CJ
Here's something close to what you have:
It was through determination that I managed to work effectively as a nurse in Australia and Africa.
I would rephrase it even more:
Determination was the key to my success as a nurse in Australia and Africa.
CJ
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