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Thein lwin Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

grammar

If we go to the moon, the writer advises that our lunch should be taken along with us there.
Please correct the sentence.Thanks in advance.
  

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It's not incorrect, but it's worded clumsily. More natural is eg If we go to the moon, the writ er advises that we should take our lunch along with us.

— Clive

  • It's not incorrect, but it's worded clumsily.
  • More natural is eg If we go to the moon, the writ er advises that we should take our lunch along with us.
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It's not incorrect, but it's worded clumsily.
More natural is
eg If we go to the moon, the writer advises that we should take our lunch along with us.
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Please, I'd like to use 'advised' instead of 'advises'.Thanks again.
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thein lwin I'd like to use 'advised' instead of 'advises'.
Then please try to do so, thein Iwin, and post your effort here. It is a simply task.
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