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Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
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Please tell me if this is OK.
Context: One of the points of the employment policy of the institution.
As per the employment policy of this institution, there is no age limit for retirement for the teaching staff. The work contract which the staff signs with the institution is renewed every two years and it will continue to be renewed after every two years as long as the institution wishes to benefit from the work of the staff or the staff wishes to continue to work for the institution.
Please tell me if this is OK.
Context: One of the points of the employment policy of the institution.
As per the employment policy of this institution, there is no age limit for retirement for the teaching staff. The work contract which the staff signs with the institution is renewed every two years and it will continue to be renewed after every two years as long as the institution wishes to benefit from the work of the staff or the staff wishes to continue to work for the institution.
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You should not include so much redundancy; it tires the reader. The policy of this institution specifies no age limit for retirement. Contracts are renewed every two years as long as the institution wishes to employ the teacher and the teacher wishes to continue teaching.
- You should not include so much redundancy; it tires the reader.
- The policy of this institution specifies no age limit for retirement.
- Contracts are renewed every two years as long as the institution wishes to employ the teacher and the teacher wishes to continue teaching.
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You should not include so much redundancy; it tires the reader.
The policy of this institution specifies no age limit for retirement. Contracts are renewed every two years as long as the institution wishes to employ the teacher and the teacher wishes to continue teaching.
The policy of this institution specifies no age limit for retirement. Contracts are renewed every two years as long as the institution wishes to employ the teacher and the teacher wishes to continue teaching.
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Mister MicawberYou should not include so much redundancy; it tires the reader.I will be more careful about this. Thank you,sir.
Sir, I have a question with and here.
In case the school does not wish to employ the teacher even when the teacher has not expressed his desire to quit, will and fit the place?
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vsuresh will and fit the place?Yes. Both parties must wish to continue, of course!
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