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Johnie Posted 11 years ago
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Just returned from a class just to discover that some cruel people blew up the school.

Any errors in the sentence?
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I just returned from a class to discover that some cruel people had blown up the school. However, it still reads strangely. Was the class you returned from outside the school?

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  • I just returned from a class to discover that some cruel people had blown up the school.
  • However, it still reads strangely.
  • Was the class you returned from outside the school?
  • I wouldn't use 'cruel people'.
  • I think I'd go for psychopaths, terrorists, extremists.
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I just returned from a class to discover that some cruel people had blown up the school.

However, it still reads strangely. Was the class you returned from outside the school? I wouldn't use 'cruel people'. I think I'd go for psychopaths, terrorists, extremists.
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