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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
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grammar

Hi

Please tell me if this is error of run-on sentence.

The difference between the ones that do (have the things they want) and the ones that don’t is not just simple luck. It’s not the lack of opportunity that one person had behind the other.

It comes down to the person, it comes down to their mindset, it comes down to their purpose, motivation and will power. It comes down to how bad they want it and how far they are willing to go.

It’s never the ones that are just motivated by money, it’s the ones who are motivated to change the world and build a legacy because that is what wealth really is.
  

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vsuresh by money, it’s the This looks like a comma splice error, mainly because the second part makes a clear contrast with the first part. The other sentence can be treated as a list, which is probably why those commas seem more acceptable there.

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  • vsuresh by money, it’s the This looks like a comma splice error, mainly because the second part makes a clear contrast with the first part.
  • The other sentence can be treated as a list, which is probably why those commas seem more acceptable there.
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vsureshby money, it’s the
This looks like a comma splice error, mainly because the second part makes a clear contrast with the first part. The other sentence can be treated as a list, which is probably why those commas seem more acceptable there.
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