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Jcwen Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Grammar

Please correct my grammar if there's any. Thank you.

Happy birthday!!! I pray that you’ll always be well and free of any kind of illness ‘cuz. above anything else, the greatest happiness a mother would want to her children is to see them in good health through the years to come. May you succeed in everything you do and all your aspirations in life come true. God bless you always!
  

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jcwen Please correct my grammar if there's any. There is indeed grammar. And there is also heartfelt emotion from her child.

  • jcwen Please correct my grammar if there's any.
  • There is indeed grammar.
  • And there is also heartfelt emotion from her child.
  • She is certainly aware of your English ability and would love to read your message in your own style and not another's.
  • Send it as it is.
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jcwenPlease correct my grammar if there's any.
There is indeed grammar. And there is also heartfelt emotion from her child. She is certainly aware of your English ability and would love to read your message in your own style and not another's. Send it as it is.
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Happy birthday!!!

I pray that you’ll always be well and free of any illness. Because, above anything else, the greatest happiness a mother wants for her children is to see them in good health for years to come.

May you succeed in everything you do and may all your aspirations in life come true.

*** bless you always!

(Alternative version with minor style edit
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Thank you much appreciated, but i'm not sure if this sentence is correct in grammar- free of any kind of illness or free in any kind of illness?
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Thank you all! You;re a big help!

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