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Japanlluvr Posted 12 years ago
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In order to sustain a consistent business prospect as a starting brand, the most effective long term marketing strategies in attracting potential customers are taken out through a variety of marketing tools, primarily across the web, but also through the wholesaling, hosting fashion shows, pop up store and fundraising for breast cancer research.
In order to sustain a consistent business prospect as a starting brand, the most effective long term marketing strategies in attracting potential customers are taken out through a variety of marketing tools, primarily across the web, but also through the wholesaling, hosting fashion shows, pop up store and fundraising for breast cancer research.
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A few quick comments. You are trying to cram too much into a single sentence. Consider using more than one.
- A few quick comments.
- You are trying to cram too much into a single sentence.
- Consider using more than one.
- II don't understand what the part up to the first comma means.
- Can you say it another way?
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A few quick comments.
You are trying to cram too much into a single sentence. Consider using more than one.
II don't understand what the part up to the first comma means. Can you say it another way?
It's meaning less to ''take strategies out through tools". Say it another way.
Want to revise and repost for further help?
Clive
You are trying to cram too much into a single sentence. Consider using more than one.
II don't understand what the part up to the first comma means. Can you say it another way?
It's meaning less to ''take strategies out through tools". Say it another way.
Want to revise and repost for further help?
Clive
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