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Anon512 Posted 12 years ago
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Grammar
Dear all,
I have an assignment to write a short story. I have done it. But I am not very sure about the grammar is correct or not. I will appreciate for those of you who willing to help me to correct if I were wrong. Below is the short story I've wrote. Please take a look. Thanks in advance.
I have one best friend from Myanmar. Her name is Sandra Ton. I have known for many years. I still remember the first time we met, that time we were attending a diploma course in Malaysia in 2012, from the first time I saw her, I thought her age is around 20 something, but I was wrong she told me her age is 30. I was surprised because she looks far younger than her age. I really love the way she behave, she’s very friendly and easy going. We often sharing about our country,culture or foods and we found that we have similar culture and favorite food. After we finished the course, both of us return to our country but we always kept in touch.
I have an assignment to write a short story. I have done it. But I am not very sure about the grammar is correct or not. I will appreciate for those of you who willing to help me to correct if I were wrong. Below is the short story I've wrote. Please take a look. Thanks in advance.
I have one best friend from Myanmar. Her name is Sandra Ton. I have known for many years. I still remember the first time we met, that time we were attending a diploma course in Malaysia in 2012, from the first time I saw her, I thought her age is around 20 something, but I was wrong she told me her age is 30. I was surprised because she looks far younger than her age. I really love the way she behave, she’s very friendly and easy going. We often sharing about our country,culture or foods and we found that we have similar culture and favorite food. After we finished the course, both of us return to our country but we always kept in touch.
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Hi, here is the corrected story - I have a best friend from Myanmar. Her name is Sandra Ton. I have known her for many years.
- Hi, here is the corrected story - I have a best friend from Myanmar.
- Her name is Sandra Ton.
- I have known her for many years.
- I still remember the first time we met, when we were attending a diploma course in Malaysia in 2012.
- I thought her age is around 20, but I was wrong and she told me her age is 30.
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Hi, here is the corrected story -
I have a best friend from Myanmar. Her name is Sandra Ton. I have known her for many years. I still remember the first time we met, when we were attending a diploma course in Malaysia in 2012. I thought her age is around 20, but I was wrong and she told me her age is 30. I was surprised because she looks far younger than her a
I have a best friend from Myanmar. Her name is Sandra Ton. I have known her for many years. I still remember the first time we met, when we were attending a diploma course in Malaysia in 2012. I thought her age is around 20, but I was wrong and she told me her age is 30. I was surprised because she looks far younger than her a
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