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Vsuresh Posted 12 years ago
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Quentin Reynolds’ description of Pierre’s deep feelings of love and affection for Joseph and the ways by which he alone is able to sense it leaves a lasting impact on the reader. The way in which certain poignant situations have been described through simile and imagery makes the narrative effective and lively.
  

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'The way in which' twice is too many: Quentin Reynolds’ description of Pierre’s deep feelings of love and affection for Joseph and the ways by which he alone is able to sense it leaves a lasting impact on the reader. The similes and imagery used to describe certain poignant situations make the narrative effective and lively.

  • 'The way in which' twice is too many: Quentin Reynolds’ description of Pierre’s deep feelings of love and affection for Joseph and the ways by which he alone is able to sense it leaves a lasting impact on the reader.
  • The similes and imagery used to describe certain poignant situations make the narrative effective and lively.
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'The way in which' twice is too many:

Quentin Reynolds’ description of Pierre’s deep feelings of love and affection for Joseph and the ways by which he alone is able to sense it leaves a lasting impact on the reader. The similes and imagery used to describe certain poignant situations make the narrative effective and lively.

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