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Vsuresh Posted 13 years ago
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Please point out the errors in grammar and word choice in this notice.
Here comes Fun, merry, and money too!
Children’s Day is round the corner. Children are keenly waiting to see what the big day has in store for them. Apart from all the merriment and fun the day always promises there is something scintillating this year.
A series of activities for children are lined for the day and the grandest of these is the BIG BAZAAR, a sale which children will hold in the school on 14th November 2013, to earn and serve the underprivileged and the down-trodden with the money made through the sale. Children of grades from 6 to 10 can sell all the items which are worthy for sale.
So, let the children put on their thinking hats and work to nourish and strengthen the marketing genius in them!
Please point out the errors in grammar and word choice in this notice.
Here comes Fun, merry, and money too!
Children’s Day is round the corner. Children are keenly waiting to see what the big day has in store for them. Apart from all the merriment and fun the day always promises there is something scintillating this year.
A series of activities for children are lined for the day and the grandest of these is the BIG BAZAAR, a sale which children will hold in the school on 14th November 2013, to earn and serve the underprivileged and the down-trodden with the money made through the sale. Children of grades from 6 to 10 can sell all the items which are worthy for sale.
So, let the children put on their thinking hats and work to nourish and strengthen the marketing genius in them!
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Here comes merriment—and money too! Children’s Day is just round the corner. Our children are keenly waiting to see what fun the big day has in store for them, and the holiday this year promises something exciting.
- Here comes merriment—and money too!
- Children’s Day is just round the corner.
- Our children are keenly waiting to see what fun the big day has in store for them, and the holiday this year promises something exciting.
- Several children's activities have been planned, and the grandest of these is the BIG BAZAAR, a sale which the children will hold in school on November 14th to earn money to help the underprivileged and the down-trodden.
- Children in grades 6 through 10 can offer for sale any items that they think are of value, so let them put on their thinking caps and exercise their marketing genius!
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Here comes merriment—and money too!
Children’s Day is just round the corner. Our children are keenly waiting to see what fun the big day has in store for them, and the holiday this year promises something exciting.
Several children's activities have been planned, and the grandest of these is the BIG BAZAAR, a sale which the children will hold in school on Novembe
Children’s Day is just round the corner. Our children are keenly waiting to see what fun the big day has in store for them, and the holiday this year promises something exciting.
Several children's activities have been planned, and the grandest of these is the BIG BAZAAR, a sale which the children will hold in school on Novembe
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