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Letter with mistakes
Sunil
23, Manhattan Avenue
Delhi 34
14 October 2013
Subject: request on leave
the class teacher
respected Sir
I wanted to my sister’s wedding whose is to be into held at bangalore on the 23rd of this month. My family is leaving to bangalore on the 19th of the month. We are return to bangalore on the 24th.
Hence. i would like you to consider my situation and grand me leaves from 19th of October till 24th of October.
Thank you
Your’s obediently
Sunil __________________________________________________
Corrected version.
Sunil
23, Manhattan Avenue
Delhi 34
14 October 2013
Subject: Request for Leave
The class teacher
Respected Sir
I want to attend my sister’s wedding which is to be in held in Bangalore on the 23rd of this month. My family is leaving for Bangalore on the 19th of this month. We are returning from Bangalore on the 24th.
Hence, I would like you to consider my situation and grant me leave from 19th of October to 24th of October.
Thank you
Yours obediently
Sunil
Letter with mistakes
Sunil
23, Manhattan Avenue
Delhi 34
14 October 2013
Subject: request on leave
the class teacher
respected Sir
I wanted to my sister’s wedding whose is to be into held at bangalore on the 23rd of this month. My family is leaving to bangalore on the 19th of the month. We are return to bangalore on the 24th.
Hence. i would like you to consider my situation and grand me leaves from 19th of October till 24th of October.
Thank you
Your’s obediently
Sunil __________________________________________________
Corrected version.
Sunil
23, Manhattan Avenue
Delhi 34
14 October 2013
Subject: Request for Leave
The class teacher
Respected Sir
I want to attend my sister’s wedding which is to be in held in Bangalore on the 23rd of this month. My family is leaving for Bangalore on the 19th of this month. We are returning from Bangalore on the 24th.
Hence, I would like you to consider my situation and grant me leave from 19th of October to 24th of October.
Thank you
Yours obediently
Sunil
Top answer
14 October 2013 [Class teacher's name] [School's address] Dear Mr/Ms [surname], I would like to attend my sister’s wedding in Bangalore on the 23rd of this month. My family is leaving for Bangalore on the 19th, and we are returning on the 24th. Please grant me leave from the 19th to the 24th of October.
- 14 October 2013 [Class teacher's name] [School's address] Dear Mr/Ms [surname], I would like to attend my sister’s wedding in Bangalore on the 23rd of this month.
- My family is leaving for Bangalore on the 19th, and we are returning on the 24th.
- Please grant me leave from the 19th to the 24th of October.
- Thank you.
- Yours sincerely, Sunil
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14 October 2013
[Class teacher's name]
[School's address]
Dear Mr/Ms [surname],
I would like to attend my sister’s wedding in Bangalore on the 23rd of this month. My family is leaving for Bangalore on the 19th, and we are returning on the 24th.
Please grant me leave from the 19th to the 24th of October.
[Class teacher's name]
[School's address]
Dear Mr/Ms [surname],
I would like to attend my sister’s wedding in Bangalore on the 23rd of this month. My family is leaving for Bangalore on the 19th, and we are returning on the 24th.
Please grant me leave from the 19th to the 24th of October.
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