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Cocoa Posted 13 years ago
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We are very grateful that you offer us observation activity sessions of your organization in Malaysia as the highlights listed below:
1. Teams Management for the public organization networks and Coordination Facilitation between partners.
a. The policy-driven strategy
b. Techniques and tools needed to help strengthen the community
2. Success stories from pilot projects dedicated to the ban of alcohol, tobacco, and drug.
  

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I suggest: We are very grateful for your offer of these observation sessions with your organization in Malaysia: 1. Team management for public organization networks and coordination facilitation between partners a. The policy-driven strategy b.

  • I suggest: We are very grateful for your offer of these observation sessions with your organization in Malaysia: 1.
  • Team management for public organization networks and coordination facilitation between partners a.
  • The policy-driven strategy b.
  • Techniques and tools for strengthening the community 2.
  • Success stories of pilot projects for alcohol, tobacco, and drug banning.
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I suggest:

We are very grateful for your offer of these observation sessions with your organization in Malaysia:


1. Team management for public organization networks and coordination facilitation between partners
a. The policy-driven strategy
b. Techniques and tools for strengthening the community
2. Success stories of pi

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