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Tri Minh Posted 14 years ago
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Can I say?

The moment I found out I became the President of the Student Government was the happiest one in my life

I am particularly worried about the "one"
Thanks
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Tri Minh The moment I found out I became the President of the Student Government was the happiest one in my life Yes, but I would make some changes: The moment I found out I had been elected ( or named ) the President of the Student Government was the happiest one of my life

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  • Tri Minh The moment I found out I became the President of the Student Government was the happiest one in my life Yes, but I would make some changes: The moment I found out I had been elected ( or named ) the President of the Student Government was the happiest one of my life
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Tri MinhThe moment I found out I became the President of the Student Government was the happiest one in my life
Yes, but I would make some changes:

The moment I found out I had been elected ( or named) the President of the Student Government was the happiest one of my life
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