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Sane1 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Grammar

Is there any flaw in the following sentence:

His choice of words, his language and his style of presentation were uniquely brilliant.
  

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Hi. Completely true as it stands.

  • Hi.
  • Completely true as it stands.
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Hi.

Completely true as it stands.
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Hi,

That's fine as it's written, but I wouldn't repeat his so many times because it is understood.

I would cast the sentence thus:

His choice of words, language and style of presentation were uniquely brilliant.

Regards

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