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Themba Dlamini Posted 15 years ago
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My name is Themba Dlamini from South Africa. English is not my first language, I hope I will get help from the forum. For starters I am writting my short bio and I am not sure about the grammar. Can someone check it for me?
Themba Dlamini is the creator of Phuzemthonjeni.com that publishes employment and small business opportunities. Having studied Electrical Engineering Themba worked his way up in the production field, started as a digital image processor up to production management. Themba covered all aspect of work as he became an operator, chairman of the shop steward committee and at last management. With Phuzemthonjeni.com, Themba is exposing opportunities that would have influenced his career better would he was exposed to them early in life to make professional decisions.
Regards
My name is Themba Dlamini from South Africa. English is not my first language, I hope I will get help from the forum. For starters I am writting my short bio and I am not sure about the grammar. Can someone check it for me?
Themba Dlamini is the creator of Phuzemthonjeni.com that publishes employment and small business opportunities. Having studied Electrical Engineering Themba worked his way up in the production field, started as a digital image processor up to production management. Themba covered all aspect of work as he became an operator, chairman of the shop steward committee and at last management. With Phuzemthonjeni.com, Themba is exposing opportunities that would have influenced his career better would he was exposed to them early in life to make professional decisions.
Regards
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com, Themba is exposing opportunities that would have influenced his career better would he was exposed to them early in life to make professional decisions. This sentence needs work. I can't figure out what you are trying to say.
- com, Themba is exposing opportunities that would have influenced his career better would he was exposed to them early in life to make professional decisions.
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Themba DlaminiWith Phuzemthonjeni.com, Themba is exposing opportunities that would have influenced his career better would he was exposed to them early in life to make professional decisions.This sentence needs work. I can't figure out what you are trying to say.
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What I am saying is that if I got this information I am sharing early in my life I would have made different or better dicisions than the decisions I made. I would like to inform youth to make better decissions than I made because of lack of information. I hope this explains it, please recontruct to make sense.
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Try this:
I use my life experience and my mistakes to advise youth in ways to avoid those same mistakes in their own lives.
I use my life experience and my mistakes to advise youth in ways to avoid those same mistakes in their own lives.
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Themba DlaminiHiMy name is Themba Dlamini from South Africa. English is not my first language, I hope I will get help from the forum. For starters I am writting my short bio and I am not sure about the grammar. Can someone check it for me? Themba Dlamini created Phuzemthonjeni.com that publishes employment and small business opportunities. Having studied Electrical Engine
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