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Vsuresh Posted 15 years ago
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Hi

Is this sentence all right?

The famished travelled after toiling over the desert was delighted on seeing a bag but when he opened he found nothing.
  

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Hi, Is this sentence all right? The famished travelled after toiling over the desert was delighted on seeing a bag but when he opened he found nothing. The famished travelle r, after toiling over the desert , was delighted on seeing a bag , but when he opened it he found nothing.

— Clive

  • Hi, Is this sentence all right?
  • The famished travelled after toiling over the desert was delighted on seeing a bag but when he opened he found nothing.
  • The famished travelle r, after toiling over the desert , was delighted on seeing a bag , but when he opened it he found nothing.
  • Clive
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Hi,

Is this sentence all right?

The famished travelled after toiling over the desert was delighted on seeing a bag but when he opened he found nothing.

The famished traveller, after toiling over the desert, was delighted on seeing a bag, but when he opene
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Clive,Thank you very much for the corrections.

Suresh
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