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Ramesh Reddy Posted 15 years ago
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The concept of transporting icebergs from Antarctic region to gulf countries to serve their needs of water is though risky and expensive, if we implement it successfully it certainly serves the needs of hundread and thousands of people over a year. We know that drilling for water is more expensive than drilling for oil in Gulf countries. But, lot of precautions should be taken in this project. As the distance of travelling is more than 3000 kilometres, we should take certain precautions. They are 1. finding of right iceberg without any cracks with the help of satellites observations 2. care should be taken to overcome the melting process when it come in contact with the warmer sea water. So protective stripes of plastic cover should be wraped to reduce the contact with the warmer sea water. 3. care also should be taken for any tipping off of the iceberg. 4. Maintaing the level of -15 degree celcius to -20 degree celcious is also essential until the reach of the destination. When it comparing to the Arctic frozen sea water, the Antarctica icebergs are natural and formed with natural snow over millions of years,
The concept of transporting icebergs from Antarctic region to gulf countries to serve their needs of water is though risky and expensive, if we implement it successfully it certainly serves the needs of hundread and thousands of people over a year. We know that drilling for water is more expensive than drilling for oil in Gulf countries. But, lot of precautions should be taken in this project. As the distance of travelling is more than 3000 kilometres, we should take certain precautions. They are 1. finding of right iceberg without any cracks with the help of satellites observations 2. care should be taken to overcome the melting process when it come in contact with the warmer sea water. So protective stripes of plastic cover should be wraped to reduce the contact with the warmer sea water. 3. care also should be taken for any tipping off of the iceberg. 4. Maintaing the level of -15 degree celcius to -20 degree celcious is also essential until the reach of the destination. When it comparing to the Arctic frozen sea water, the Antarctica icebergs are natural and formed with natural snow over millions of years,
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Hello Ramesh Reddy; Here are some suggestions. Though the concept of transporting icebergs from the Antarctic region to G ulf countries to serve their water needs of water is though risky and expensive, if we implement it successfully , it certainly would serve s the needs of hund reds and thousands of people over a year. We know that drilling for water is more expensive than drilling for oil in Gulf countries.
- Hello Ramesh Reddy; Here are some suggestions.
- Though the concept of transporting icebergs from the Antarctic region to G ulf countries to serve their water needs of water is though risky and expensive, if we implement it successfully , it certainly would serve s the needs of hund reds and thousands of people over a year.
- We know that drilling for water is more expensive than drilling for oil in Gulf countries.
- But , lot of precautions should be taken in this project.
- As the distance of travelling is more than 3000 kilometres, we should take certain precautions.
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Hello Ramesh Reddy; Here are some suggestions.
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