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Markroe Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Grammar
I am working on a proofreading job and am having a problem with the following sentences:
There is no conference, presbytery, diocese, or synod meeting that must vote on the formation of an Office of Youth Ministry or the such. When ministry is an open platform, individuals can contribute materials and resources across a various and distributed network.
There is no conference, presbytery, diocese, or synod meeting that must vote on the formation of an Office of Youth Ministry or the such. When ministry is an open platform, individuals can contribute materials and resources across a various and distributed network.
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This is almost correct, but it's long and cumbersome. It helps to change two words (just my recommendation): ... Office of Youth Ministry or the like .
- This is almost correct, but it's long and cumbersome.
- It helps to change two words (just my recommendation): ...
- Office of Youth Ministry or the like .
- resources across a varied and distributed network.
- The adjective various is usually used to describe a plural noun.
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This is almost correct, but it's long and cumbersome. It helps to change two words (just my recommendation):
... Office of Youth Ministry or the like.
... resources across a varied and distributed network.
The adjective various is usually used to describe a plural noun. The form varied is more commonly used to describe a singular
... Office of Youth Ministry or the like.
... resources across a varied and distributed network.
The adjective various is usually used to describe a plural noun. The form varied is more commonly used to describe a singular
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