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Hellonano Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Grammar

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Could you send me an invitation letter? Becasue I will come to korea in june, so I have to produce some documents in my office.

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The logical relationship between the parts is not very clear to me. The "Because" clause sounds like you are introducing an explanation that the reader will not already know. On the other hand, it also seems as if the visit to Korea in June is the same visit you're wanting an invitation letter for, in which case the reader presumably will already know.

  • The logical relationship between the parts is not very clear to me.
  • The "Because" clause sounds like you are introducing an explanation that the reader will not already know.
  • On the other hand, it also seems as if the visit to Korea in June is the same visit you're wanting an invitation letter for, in which case the reader presumably will already know.
  • It may be that you can simply say: "Could you send me an invitation letter?
  • " I'm assuming that "for" is the word you want.
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The logical relationship between the parts is not very clear to me. The "Because" clause sounds like you are introducing an explanation that the reader will not already know. On the other hand, it also seems as if the visit to Korea in June is the same visit you're wanting an invitation letter for, in which case the reader presumably will already know.

It may be that you can simpl

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