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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Grammar

HI
I don't know how to revise these sentences in parentheses.
There are something wrong in grammar
Thank you for your help.

1.National Hawthorne often complained of how (few )material his life provided for his fiction.

2. Soapberry trees and surubs thrive in tropical regions, and (being) ornamental plants in Florida.

3. From the monitoring of earthquake waves (it is evidence) that the Earth's outer core is liquid.

4. Phoenix stands where the Hohokam Indians built a canal system and carried on irrigated farming (before long )the time of Colunbus.

5. Although best known for her prose works, Maya was (also published) several collections of poetry.
  

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Hello KK Please spell correctly when you make questions. 1. Nathaniel Hawthorne often complained of how (little) material his life provided for his fiction.

  • Hello KK Please spell correctly when you make questions.
  • 1.
  • Nathaniel Hawthorne often complained of how (little) material his life provided for his fiction.
  • Material can be used both as a count noun and as a non-count noun.
  • Here it is used as a non count-noun and so the preceding modifier should be 'little', not 'few'.
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Hello KK

Please spell correctly when you make questions.

1.Nathaniel Hawthorne often complained of how (little) material his life provided for his fiction.
Material can be used both as a count noun and as a non-count noun. Here it is used as a non count-noun and so the preceding modifier should be 'little', not 'few'.


2. Soapberry tree
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Something worries me about 5. ...
You have to change things in the sentence outside the ( ) to get it right, strange...
Should have been
... Maya was (also publishing) in several ...
This way, you only have to edit what's in the ( )

I think the excercise was wrongly formulated.
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Ahh, I might have made a mistake about 5.


paco
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I couldn't say, Paco, I think the question was not well formulated
It would make sense if , although she's mostly known for her prose writing, "she was also published in ..."
An alternative would be "... she also published...", but I don't know whether she's a publisher...

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