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Grammar
Dear Teacher, could you please check my sentences for any grammar mistakes or anything that does not make sense?
Tuesday, October 5th was a very eventful day in our lives! To ensure our garments matched the fashion of the historical period, most of us dressed in attires characteristic of those in the late 19th century. For example, Jacob replaced his jeans with black,tucked in his socks, pants to make them look like hikers. On top, he wore a white buttoned shirt. His outdated, yet very modern in bygone days, look was finished off with a black vest and suspenders. Sigrid was dressed in a long white, full skirt and a matching white, lace-embellished top. Kathleen’s head was covered with an old-fashioned hat decorated with artificial flowers.Undisputably, in appearance we resembled many boys and girls of that far away time. However, neither similarities in appearance nor anything else could have prepared us for what we experienced on our field visit to the 1881 School house.
Thank you very much for your help!!
Lana
Tuesday, October 5th was a very eventful day in our lives! To ensure our garments matched the fashion of the historical period, most of us dressed in attires characteristic of those in the late 19th century. For example, Jacob replaced his jeans with black,tucked in his socks, pants to make them look like hikers. On top, he wore a white buttoned shirt. His outdated, yet very modern in bygone days, look was finished off with a black vest and suspenders. Sigrid was dressed in a long white, full skirt and a matching white, lace-embellished top. Kathleen’s head was covered with an old-fashioned hat decorated with artificial flowers.Undisputably, in appearance we resembled many boys and girls of that far away time. However, neither similarities in appearance nor anything else could have prepared us for what we experienced on our field visit to the 1881 School house.
Thank you very much for your help!!
Lana
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Tuesday, October 5, was a very eventful day in our lives! To ensure our clothes matched the fashion of the historical period, most of us dressed in attire characteristic of the late 19th century. For example, Jacob replaced his jeans with black pants tucked in his socks to make them look like hikers.
- Tuesday, October 5, was a very eventful day in our lives!
- To ensure our clothes matched the fashion of the historical period, most of us dressed in attire characteristic of the late 19th century.
- For example, Jacob replaced his jeans with black pants tucked in his socks to make them look like hikers.
- On top he wore a white buttoned shirt.
- Outdated today, yet very modern in bygone days, his look was finished off with a black vest and suspenders.
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Tuesday, October 5, was a very eventful day in our lives! To ensure our clothes matched the fashion of the historical period, most of us dressed in attire characteristic of the late 19th century. For example, Jacob replaced his jeans with black pants tucked in his socks to make them look like hikers. On top he wore a white buttoned shirt. Outdated today, yet very modern in bygone days, his look
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