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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Gramma Checking Please
This is what i wrote to college admission officer.
Please correct all grammar mistakes!
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I'm a one of (name of school)*** student who accepted for 2005 fall semester. I have never finished a course at GMU because unfortunately my mom diagnosed with cancer when just after 05 fell semester was started so I dropped all classes to take care of her. I was the only one who is available. my mom was on my number one priority list so I have no other choices back then.
About 2weeks ago my mom passed away, cancer is finally won. Anyway I realized I need to go back to school so I visited school web site and tried to make a schedule for 07 spring semester. But I was not able to do it.
I see on my student ID it expires on Aug 2011 and my student e-mail is still active so I thought it’s good until then.
My question is Do I need to re-apply? What Do I need to do re-apply?
As I told you before last a year and half I didn’t involve with any school. My High school GPA and SAT scores are still same do you need them again anyway? or just complete Application Checklist on school website?
Please correct all grammar mistakes!
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I'm a one of (name of school)*** student who accepted for 2005 fall semester. I have never finished a course at GMU because unfortunately my mom diagnosed with cancer when just after 05 fell semester was started so I dropped all classes to take care of her. I was the only one who is available. my mom was on my number one priority list so I have no other choices back then.
About 2weeks ago my mom passed away, cancer is finally won. Anyway I realized I need to go back to school so I visited school web site and tried to make a schedule for 07 spring semester. But I was not able to do it.
I see on my student ID it expires on Aug 2011 and my student e-mail is still active so I thought it’s good until then.
My question is Do I need to re-apply? What Do I need to do re-apply?
As I told you before last a year and half I didn’t involve with any school. My High school GPA and SAT scores are still same do you need them again anyway? or just complete Application Checklist on school website?
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I am a (name of school)*** student who was accepted for your 2005 fall semester. However, I did not finish my course at GMU because my mother was diagnosed with cancer just after the 2005 fell semester started; I dropped all my classes in order to take care of her, because I was the only family member available. My mother was number one on my priority list, and I had no other choice at that time.
- I am a (name of school)*** student who was accepted for your 2005 fall semester.
- However, I did not finish my course at GMU because my mother was diagnosed with cancer just after the 2005 fell semester started; I dropped all my classes in order to take care of her, because I was the only family member available.
- My mother was number one on my priority list, and I had no other choice at that time.
- About two weeks ago my mother passed away; the cancer finally won.
- I realize that I need to go back to school, and I have visited your school web site and attempted to draw up a schedule for 2007 spring semester; however I was not able to do it.
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I am a (name of school)*** student who was accepted for your 2005 fall semester. However, I did not finish my course at GMU because my mother was diagnosed with cancer just after the 2005 fell semester started; I dropped all my classes in order to take care of her, because I was the only family member available. My mother was number one on my priority list, and I had no other choice at tha
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