"government spend too much money " in a formal way
I need to write a sentence to indicate "government spend too much money on art" in a formal way. Please someone let me know my approach is correct or not.
However, certain critics today contend that governments are exerting excessive portion of taxation on entertainment industry.
What I wanted to say in this sentence is similar to following sentence.
However, some critics today argue that government are spending too much money on art.
Please tell me whether the meaning of these two sentences are same or not?
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dileepa However, certain critics today contend that governments are exerting excessive portion of taxation on entertainment industry. However, certain critics today contend that governments are exerting (not a good word) excessive portion (The noun phrase needs an article. ) on entertainment industry.
- dileepa However, certain critics today contend that governments are exerting excessive portion of taxation on entertainment industry.
- However, certain critics today contend that governments are exerting (not a good word) excessive portion (The noun phrase needs an article.
- ) on entertainment industry.
- (The noun phrase needs an article.
- The "entertainment industry" consists of for-profit business enterprises.
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dileepaHowever, certain critics today contend that governments are exerting excessive portion of taxation on entertainment industry.
However, certain critics today contend that governments are exerting (not a good word) excessive portion (The noun phrase
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