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Got soaked
I have revised the paragraph below originally written by a student. Please correct the errors in it. Thanks!
One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home. The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when I got home. The next day, I got a fever and kept coughing. I noticed that I had a bad a cold and I had to see a doctor. The doctor prescribed some medicine for me and told me to get sufficient sleep and take sick leave until I was recovered.
One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home. The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when I got home. The next day, I got a fever and kept coughing. I noticed that I had a bad a cold and I had to see a doctor. The doctor prescribed some medicine for me and told me to get sufficient sleep and take sick leave until I was recovered.
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Is "cram school" a type of educational institution? One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home.
- Is "cram school" a type of educational institution?
- One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs.
- I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home.
- The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when before I got home.
- (to avoid the repetition of "get", you can write ...
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Is "cram school" a type of educational institution?
One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home. The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when before I got home. (to avoid the repeti
One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home. The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when before I got home. (to avoid the repeti
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