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Contiluo Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Got soaked

I have revised the paragraph below originally written by a student. Please correct the errors in it. Thanks!

One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home. The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when I got home. The next day, I got a fever and kept coughing. I noticed that I had a bad a cold and I had to see a doctor. The doctor prescribed some medicine for me and told me to get sufficient sleep and take sick leave until I was recovered.
  

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Is "cram school" a type of educational institution? One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home.

  • Is "cram school" a type of educational institution?
  • One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs.
  • I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home.
  • The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when before I got home.
  • (to avoid the repetition of "get", you can write ...
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Is "cram school" a type of educational institution?

One afternoon last year, when I was on my way home from a cram school class, it started to rain cats and dogs. I did not have any rain gear, so I had to brave the rain running home. The rain fell down in torrents, and I got soaked when before I got home. (to avoid the repeti

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