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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Google vs yahoo
If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?
Furthermore, Google and Yahoo take a different path in web services. Google has attempted to minimize the time that the Internet users spend on any given task, creating a series of tools for the user, such as Google Maps, Gmail, and even going so far as to produce their own cell phone operating system,
Furthermore, Google and Yahoo take a different path in web services. Google has attempted to minimize the time that the Internet users spend on any given task, creating a series of tools for the user, such as Google Maps, Gmail, and even going so far as to produce their own cell phone operating system,
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Sun: The first sentence can be improved by making "path" plural (two companies, two different paths) Furthermore, Google and Yahoo take different paths in web services. In the second sentence, I read that the Google tools help to minimize the user's time spent on a particular task, which might not be what you intended. Is a cell phone operating system a "web service"?
- Sun: The first sentence can be improved by making "path" plural (two companies, two different paths) Furthermore, Google and Yahoo take different paths in web services.
- In the second sentence, I read that the Google tools help to minimize the user's time spent on a particular task, which might not be what you intended.
- Is a cell phone operating system a "web service"?
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Sun:
The first sentence can be improved by making "path" plural (two companies, two different paths)
Furthermore, Google and Yahoo take different paths in web services.
In the second sentence, I read that the Google tools help to minimize the user's time spent on a particular task, which might not be what you intended. Is a cell phone operating system a "web service"?
The first sentence can be improved by making "path" plural (two companies, two different paths)
Furthermore, Google and Yahoo take different paths in web services.
In the second sentence, I read that the Google tools help to minimize the user's time spent on a particular task, which might not be what you intended. Is a cell phone operating system a "web service"?
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