Good morning. This is a short informal letter when I found my flatmate Could you check it?

Thanks in advance.
well, it starts this way :

Hi, Nahín

Thanks for respond my last e-mail. Great to hear news about your job and your family.

I got to Brazil a pair of days ago for work and I'm staying in a flat, which is close to the beach and it has big rooms. It's very tidy - only takes a few minutes or so to be in the office on time.

I knew my flatmate through this thing called 'speed flatmating' on the internet. His name is Santiago and is from Lika like us.

You'll never guess what! he's a proffesional cook in a restaurant, his own restaurant. When we met - he asked me what kinds of dishes I like, and we just clicked!

Must go now or the boss gets angry. Be in touch.
Best wishes.

Yuri