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Stevenukd Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

GOOD LIFE

Dear Teachers,

1. You still have a beautiful life waiting for you ahead of you, try to live a good life.

- Is this ok to say?

Thanks so much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
  

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Hi, 1. You still have a beautiful life waiting for you ahead of you, try to live a good life. It seems a bit redundant to say both 'waiting for you' and 'ahead of you'.

— Clive

  • Hi, 1.
  • You still have a beautiful life waiting for you ahead of you, try to live a good life.
  • It seems a bit redundant to say both 'waiting for you' and 'ahead of you'.
  • You still have a beautiful life waiting for you.
  • Try to live a good one.
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Hi,

1. You still have a beautiful life waiting for you ahead of you, try to live a good life.

It seems a bit redundant to say both 'waiting for you' and 'ahead of you'.

You still have a beautiful life waiting for you. Try to live a good one. (or maybe 'Try to live it well'.)

Best wishes, Clive
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