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Uktous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Good IT skills, strong analytical skills and solid MBA background
Hi,
Question:
Which sentence is the best?
I think none of them is good, could u plz improve the sentence?
Sentence1:
With good IT skills, strong analytical skills and solid MBA background, I am confident that I would be a valuable asset to your company.
Sentence2:
With good IT and analytical skills and solid MBA background, I am confident that I would be a valuable asset to your company.
Sentence3:
With good IT and analytical skills, and solid MBA background, I am confident that I would be a valuable asset to your company.
My opinion:
Sentence1: the word "skills" is repeated. Not good.
Sentence2: easy to be misread.
Sentence3: there're just 2 noun but there is a ", comma". Not good.
Thanks
Question:
Which sentence is the best?
I think none of them is good, could u plz improve the sentence?
Sentence1:
With good IT skills, strong analytical skills and solid MBA background, I am confident that I would be a valuable asset to your company.
Sentence2:
With good IT and analytical skills and solid MBA background, I am confident that I would be a valuable asset to your company.
Sentence3:
With good IT and analytical skills, and solid MBA background, I am confident that I would be a valuable asset to your company.
My opinion:
Sentence1: the word "skills" is repeated. Not good.
Sentence2: easy to be misread.
Sentence3: there're just 2 noun but there is a ", comma". Not good.
Thanks
Top answer
With great IT skills and an analytical mind, and having successfully achieved my MBA I am confident I would be a valuable asset to your company.
- With great IT skills and an analytical mind, and having successfully achieved my MBA I am confident I would be a valuable asset to your company.
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With great IT skills and an analytical mind, and having successfully achieved my MBA I am confident I would be a valuable asset to your company.
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"With great IT skills and an analytical mind, and having successfully achieved my MBA I am confident I would be a valuable asset to your company."
Hi,
Is it better to add 1 more comma?
Ie, become
With great IT skills and an analytical mind, and having successfully achieved my MBA, I am confident I wo
Hi,
Is it better to add 1 more comma?
Ie, become
With great IT skills and an analytical mind, and having successfully achieved my MBA, I am confident I wo
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I don't know. I think that it should be a full stop there but as I said I don't know! Sorry I'm not a teacher but will start training soon. I answer the questions that I think that I can. I thought you were attending an interview and wanted to make this statement ,in which case the comma wouldn't matter. Or have I confused you with another post? Or have you just wanted to improve your knowl
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