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Please include why you would like to work for the xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Group :

Firstly, I am really keen for being considered at xxxxxx group, mainly, due to the fact that it is a global company whose diversity is its most important asset. In addition, I have experience with sales, customer relationship actions, relationship marketing and hospitality. More importantly, I believe that my country can offer golden opportunities with the proximity of the World Cup (2014) and the Olympic Games (2016). In other words I am really interested in taking part in your personnel in order to broaden my experience and face new challenges in my career.