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Simpleibr Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Good day! Please anyone revise my letter. Thanks

Dear Madam,

Good day!

I am please to inform you that D*** ******** School, Annual Day Cosmica Celebrations will be held at the School Soccer Field on the 5th & 6th of December 2018.

Once I receive the invitation coming from the QC, I will immediately inform you to hand it over to you.

  

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Dear Madam, Good day! School, Cosmica , will be held at the s chool s occer f ield on the 5th & 6th of December 2018. Once I receive the invitatio n fr om the QC, I will immediately inform you to hand it over to you.

  • Dear Madam, Good day!
  • School, Cosmica , will be held at the s chool s occer f ield on the 5th & 6th of December 2018.
  • Once I receive the invitatio n fr om the QC, I will immediately inform you to hand it over to you.
  • (I think you need to mention the name of the person who is to handover the invitation)
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Dear Madam,

Good day!

I am pleased to inform you that Annual Day Celebrations of ...........School, Cosmica, will be held at the school soccer field on the 5th & 6th of Decem

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