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Brentlopez001 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Good Day Guys! Just need some corrections, Thanks!

I would like to request your good office to provide me a salary certificate to be used in processing my new visa profession.
Your favorable action regarding this matter will be highly appreciated.
  

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It's too wordy and sounds Dickensian. 'Please send me a salary certificate to support my new visa application. ' Rover

— Rover_KE

  • It's too wordy and sounds Dickensian.
  • 'Please send me a salary certificate to support my new visa application.
  • ' Rover
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It's too wordy and sounds Dickensian.

'Please send me a salary certificate to support my new visa application. Thank you.'

Rover
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