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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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That night we stayed in a big hotel. It was spacious, well-lit, elegant and graceful. We were very pleased with its modernized facilities and customer first service. On the third day, we left for Nantou to visit a temple which has good attendance. There were hundreds of followers to show their respect to the gods. We also offered our piety to pray for blessings at the temple. It’s a wonderful family trip.
  

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That night we stayed in a big hotel. It was spacious, well-lit, elegant and graceful. We were very pleased with its modernized facilities and customer first service.

  • That night we stayed in a big hotel.
  • It was spacious, well-lit, elegant and graceful.
  • We were very pleased with its modernized facilities and customer first service.
  • On the third day, we left for Nantou to visit a temple which has good attendance .
  • There were hundreds of followers to show their respect to the gods.
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That night we stayed in a big hotel. It was spacious, well-lit, elegant and graceful. We were very pleased with its modernized facilities and customer first service. On the third day, we left for Nantou to visit a temple which has good attendance. There were hundreds of followers to show their respect to the gods. We also offered our piety to pray for blessings a
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That night we stayed in a big hotel. It was spacious, well-lit, elegant and graceful. We were very pleased with its modern facilities and client oriented service. On the third day, we left for Nantou to visit a temple which is full of good attendance. There were hundreds of followers showing their respect to the gods. We also offered our
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We were very pleased with its modern facilities and guest-oriented service. On the third day, we left for Nantou to visit a temple which was well attended. There were hundreds of followers showing their respect to the gods. We also made offerings to pray for blessings at the temple. It was a wonderful family trip.

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