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Sunipau Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Gondola display

Refer to our discussion on above subject matter. Thank you for your positive response for the display of Camel Nuts. The product movement from the shelf is very good… repeated orders are supplying to the stations. We have achieved the sale of $ 25000/- last month… expecting the sales of above $100000/- per month if we display in the promotional gondola as an awareness to the customer. Appreciate if you could grant us the approval to display Camel Nuts to the Promotional gondola for the period of 15 days .. looking forward for you favorable answer..
  

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Hello, sunipau - and welcome to English Forums. Eliminate the first sentence. Thank you for your positive response to the Camel Nuts display .

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  • Hello, sunipau - and welcome to English Forums.
  • Eliminate the first sentence.
  • Thank you for your positive response to the Camel Nuts display .
  • The product movement from the shelf has been very good.
  • Repeat orders are being received by the outlets .
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Hello, sunipau - and welcome to English Forums.

Eliminate the first sentence.

Thank you for your positive response to the Camel Nuts display. The product movement from the shelf has been very good. Repeat orders are being received by the outlets. We achieved sales of $ 25,000 last month and expect sales
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Thank you for you positive response to the camel Nuts display. The product movement from the shelf has been very good. Repeat order are being received by the outlets. We achieved sales of $ 25000/- last month and expect sales of above $ 100000/- per month if we display in the promotional gondola. The label, the pack size and the price are very good to the end consumer. Could you grant us approval
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