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Gold mining

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Even though half of the gold mining were destructed by an earthquake, the supply of gold will be restored as it used to be for the following reasons: first, the demand for jewerly is still increasing . Second, potential companies will continute to invest in gold mining.
  

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Even though half of the gold mining businesses were destructed by an earthquake, the supply of gold will be restored to previous levels for the following reasons: Firstly, the demand for jewelry is still increasing. Secondly, companies will continue to invest in gold mining because of the potential returns.

  • Even though half of the gold mining businesses were destructed by an earthquake, the supply of gold will be restored to previous levels for the following reasons: Firstly, the demand for jewelry is still increasing.
  • Secondly, companies will continue to invest in gold mining because of the potential returns.
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Even though half of the gold mining businesses were destructed by an earthquake, the supply of gold will be restored to previous levels for the following reasons: Firstly, the demand for jewelry is still increasing. Secondly, companies will continue to invest in gold mining because of the potential returns.

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