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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Going to the mountains

Hello,


Recently, I went to the mountains with my friend and afterwards, I tried to write a short essay about our trip, but I'm struggling with grammar.

Is the following sentence correct?

"She was breathing heavily, raising her chin and moving slowly forward."

Thank you!

  

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anonymous raising her chin The grammar is OK, but that phrase is an odd action.

  • anonymous raising her chin The grammar is OK, but that phrase is an odd action.
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anonymous raising her chin

The grammar is OK, but that phrase is an odd action.

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