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Essay & Composition Writing

Go to the web

If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?

For your homework, search the internet for the information for your topic and print out at least five diffrent sources which will help you to write a research paper and bring them to next class.
  

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First, my advice would be - don't be so wordy. That's a sentence that should be broken down so it is easier to understand. For your homework, search the internet for information about your topic.

  • First, my advice would be - don't be so wordy.
  • That's a sentence that should be broken down so it is easier to understand.
  • For your homework, search the internet for information about your topic.
  • Print out at least five different sources that (or which) will help you write a research paper.
  • Bring this to the next class.
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First, my advice would be - don't be so wordy. That's a sentence that should be broken down so it is easier to understand.

For your homework, search the internet for information about your topic. Print out at least five different sources that (or which) will help you write a research paper. Bring this to the next class.

Rob Hewson

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